Both Dear and Hi in the US PI Cognitive Invite to take the assessment

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In the US version of the email invite to take the cognitive assessment, there is a flaw. It says Dear... and then straight after Hi!
Dear Erik Eriksson
Hi! You're invited to take the PI Cognitive Assessment. Please read the instructions below and click the link when you're ready to take the assessment. Thank you!

Why not remove the Hi! - it is redundant and looks silly or

Remove the Hi! and write
Hi Erik Eriksson,
You’re invited to………..

#2 would be the best option as Dear is becoming a bit old-fashioned

Under Consideration Suggested by: Dorte Eghave Upvoted: 11 Sep, '23 Comments: 0

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